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Clueless 5 the great maze #9 must read Clueless 4 before reading
Varun 9/19/10
EDITED
The next day I still didn't get my shoe and I was tired of hiding my left foot to everybody.
Ya I knew I was never going to get my shoe but that didn't mean I should stop trying.
I went back to bed the next day and started falling.
But this time there was a portal under me.
I teloported to a giant mansion.
It was huge!
It was like eleven floors tall.
It looked like a happy place.
Then I looked behind me and all I saw was a giant hole.
Who knows how far deep that hole was.
Anyway I walked up to the mansion.
I rang it's doorbell and then it suddenly turned to night and I heard howling.
I turned into a haunted mansion!
I quietly opened the door and walked in.
I tiptoed slowly.
I had no idea where was and I didn't care because that place was scary.
I opened another door and heard a laughing noise.
I quietly tiptoed inside the door.
Then I saw a tiny closet I looked inside of it.
I saw a stand with a shoe on it.
It was my shoe!
I felt so reileved that I found my shoe.
But then I started floating (instead of falling) right before I grabbed it.
But the shoe was floating too.
Then I suddenly started to do flips.
I landed on an ice cube.
I looked around and all I saw was ice.
I walked around the planet and I saw a piece of paper.
:It said we have been expecting you your shoe is somewhere here but you half to find it.
But then I saw a giant ice cube.
I saw a boot shaped piece of ice but I couldn't chisel an ice cube that big.
But then I saw a note under the giant ice cube the top was sticking out.
The note said that: one kick would do the trick.
I didn't think kicking it would work but I did it anyway.
Then I saw a crack in it then another then another.
Then the thing broke
down.
Inside was my shoe then I started floating again.
I went to a desertish place.
There was miles of sand.
I looked around and all I saw cacti and sand.
Then I saw a flash of white reflecting from the blazing sun.
I walked up to it and saw a really shiny note.
It's said:I'm glad you made it here your next clue is under this note.
I knew what that meant.
I had to dig but than I thought who made these clues.
I started digging no note(clue).
I kept on digging.
I was digging so long I forget how long I was digging.
Finally when I about had given up I saw Water with a wet piece of paper.
I picked up the piece of paper it said:for your next clue find a tree.
I looked around and I didn't see a tree.
I started walking around the desert.
But then I thought were could I find a tree.
I looked down at my feet.
But then I saw a design on my shoe.
It was a tree!
Then I saw a piece of paper sticking out from my shoe(the one I had).
The paper said:Your shoe is at the last puddle of water.
The last puddle of water I thought.
Then I remembered the puddle I dug up to get that clue.
I ran to the puddle.
Then I felt some sweat go down my face.
I went to the puddle.
I saw my shoe.
Right before I grabbed I started floating again.
I landed on a blazing planet with a lot of lava.
Now I was really sweating!
I saw these lava rocks those were my only platforms.
There was a clue on the lava rock I landed on.
I read the clue it said:If you can still take the heat touch the lava for your next clue.
I was thinking WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
I don't want to burn myself!
Well I had to.
I did a really fast touch.
It really burned but still no clue.
I jumped from lava rock to lava rock.
Until finally I found a cave.
I really needed to get into the shade.
I jumped in the cave.
I saw letters in the wall(inside the cave).
It said The Lava.
Then I thought the clue said The Lava.
I touched it.
Some of the letters were rubbed off.
But in it's place was a tiny slot with a paper in it.
The paper said:before this place burns up find a way out for the clue to your final planet before you go home.
Then I thought how am I going to find a way out of here.
I looked down in sadness.
Then I started walking around the cave.
But then I saw the icky stuff (slime) and a hole too.
I knew what that meant I was getting out of here.
I did the same thing as on planet on the planet that exploded.Right when I was about to start falling I started floating(again).
I landed on like a combination of all of the planets.
It was awesome!
They also added a racing part of the planet too.
I also saw a Halloween part of the planet.
I landed on the racing part of the planet.
Right under me there was a clue (like always).
The clue said:You'll find your next clue inside a pumpkin.
I knew exactly where to find a pumpkin.
At the Halloween part of th planet.
I looked at the Halloween part of the planet.
It was hard to get there because I had to cross the lava part of the planet to get to the Halloween part of the planet.
When I got to the Halloween part of the planet.
I saw a pumpkin patch.
How was I going to find one clue with many pumpkins.
I looked in one no clue.
I looked in another still pumpkin still no clue.
I took me a while to find the right pumpkin.
The clue was inside it (obviously).
The clue said:your shoe is in a go cart.
That had to be the racing part.
I walked past the ice part of the planet to get to the racing part of the planet.
I saw all kinds of cars.
But I didn't see a go cart.
Then I saw a giant go cart it was huge.
I climbed it up.
At the top I saw a shoe.
But then I realized that isn't my shoe!
I came all this way for nothing.
I jumped down from the go cart and fell into a portal.
I went back to my bed safe and sound.
Bye.
Comments (2)
varun said
at 4:14 pm on Sep 20, 2010
I finally finished.
Kathy Shields said
at 6:15 pm on Sep 19, 2010
Take you time! Editing is the most important part of the creative process.
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